Creating Characters

Creating vivid, memorable characters in our novels or short stories can sometimes be daunting. I find it helpful to keep the following ideas in mind as I do.

• Create characters from real life and real circumstances
• Create characters that show who they are by what they say and do
• Create characters with individual voice and style
• Create characters that move the story and reveal character
• Create characters readers will love, or love to hate.
• Create and develop a difference between major and minor characters
• Create the best viewpoint to move the storyline forward.

Suggestions on how to approach each of these bullet points will be discussed in future posts. Mark this blog as a favorite and pay it forward with your comments, thereby helping others learn what works for you.

Guidelines on Writing a Synopsis

I. Hook: Picture this: You have just pitched your novel to an agent. She hands you her business card and says, “We’ve been looking for a novel along those very lines,” she says. “How soon can you send me the first three chapters and a synopsis?” Will you be able to do it?

II. The Arguments: If the story grabs readers, who cares about the synopsis? No matter how compelling your first chapter is, the agent or editor cannot tell if your story heads in the right direction if they don’t know where the plot is ultimately going. Be sure your first chapter involves the first stages of the plot. If you need help with plot structure, Christopher Vogler’s book, The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for Storytellers and Screenwriters is an excellent resource.

Many accomplished novelists would rather write five novels to one synopsis. Doesn’t this prove it’s not necessary? Even if the agent that loves your novel, she cannot market it to publishers without a synopsis. Then once it’s published, every reviewer, book store, etc. will need it (turned into a teaser that doesn’t reveal the ending) to make people want to buy it.

What does it do that the actual story doesn’t? The synopsis gives an overview of the plot and primary characters while the chapters show your skill in fleshing out the story into scenes. The synopsis and chapters must complement each other.

III. Just do it: Make no mistake, without a synopsis, your novel can’t go anywhere. Even if you self-publish, you’ll need to promote the book by way of variations of your synopses, etc.

Writing Tidbits and Super Bowl Statistics

It’s Sunday, and not just ANY Sunday, it’s Super Bowl Sunday–when even the stock market pays attention to who wins and loses the Super Bowl. According to statistics, should the old NFL team win, things will be looking up this year in the stock market. I’m not sure who the old NFL team is–but that statistic–which is reported to be 75% accurate, leads me to cheer for the old NFL team.

However, believe it or not, there are still people in this country who do not spend six hours in front of the television with the pre-game entertainment-and then another 4 hours of game. If you are one of those, you might be tempted to hide away and write (It should be no problem to hide–since the rest of the country is in front of the TV) I’ll pass along a list of things to propel you on your way–hopefully.

Things to keep in mind as you write, or to spur you on to something new to write.

Keep it witty and sharp.
Use a lot of expression.
Think about the weirdest thing that ever happened to you or your family and begin writing.
Tell a story about a pirate ship.
Writing is just as easy as saying it, it just takes a lot longer.
Only difference between you and a published author is the author works longer on it with lots of rewrites. (Hint)
Every time you go back you see changes that need to be made, constant process.

Writing prompt:
Open a book-any book-take the first three words in the book, write them down on a piece of paper or in a Word doc, and tell yourself GO.

These suggestions or insights might not keep you busy through the whole Super Bowl day-but there’s always snack time!

HOW I WRITE

People always ask a writer how they write. How do they think up all the ideas?

I write any ol’ way I can.

First and foremost, I am a storycatcher. To say I love story doesn’t really do justice to the depth of my commitment to keep it alive. I believe stories reflect life’s lessons and connect us one to the other, they humanize us, reflecting our joys, our passions, our sadness, and our spiritual path. Stories create civilizations and hold them together. They provide full-spectrum color in our otherwise black and white world.

After a lifetime of absorbing every story available to me, I felt a groundswell of story overtake my psyche. At that point, I became not only a storycatcher, but also a storyteller.

At times, writing comes easy for me. I sail along excited about the journey, wondering where my characters will next take me. Then, at other times, it’s plow, plow, plow, and still a meager crop. It can be painful, laborious, and extremely taxing.

But words, characters, setting, and plot can also come like divine revelation flowing straight from heaven, through the tips of my fingers, to the keyboard.

Many authors love writing the first draft. I am not one of those. I dread it. The only thing that gets me through it is my bull-headed, task oriented determination. I force my body into my writing corner, apply my seat to the chair and pound out the words on my computer. Of course, there are also days when I feel the slightest infatuation with it, and at other times, perhaps even a little lust, but seldom love.

If I could wrap my brain around writing a detailed outline in advance, the first draft might excite me more, but a synopsis is about the best I can do. I’ve learned to not beat myself up over that. I’ve learned that my brain works the way it works, and how I write works for me. I’ve learned to be patient with my quirky writing style, and I continue to challenge myself to learn more effective methods of writing. Hopefully, over time, those new methods will make my first draft less painful.

However, the one thing that keeps me working on the first draft is the knowledge that once I finish it, I can start the rewrite. Revision turns me on. That is where I dig down and get better acquainted with my characters. Where they begin to take on a life of their own, where they direct me where they want to go, do and say. Where they dig their heels in and refuse to follow my lead. Where I smell what they smell, hear what they hear and feel what they feel.

My writing career began after years of employment in the human services field where I learned to pay attention to the slightest nuances of my world. People who know me have remarked that I see everything and miss nothing. I guess I do. When I write dialogue, I dig down inside myself until I find that character dwelling within my psyche, and hear her/his voice speaking to me.

I write and revise until I find the exact word or group of words that express the emotion, the character, the personality, the opinion, the voice, the—whatever—of a story. When I can’t find the words that do that, I look at the work of other writers and modify what they have done to fit my character or my plot. When I run out of ideas, I’ve been known to pull a random book off of my bookshelf, choose the first few words of a sentence, type it in, and let my muse carry me where it wishes.

I like to write the synopsis of a new work in advance of the first word on the page. When I get stuck in my plot, I can go back to the synopsis and get back on track. Of course, the storyline might well veer from what I first envisioned, and that’s okay. But if I’m stuck, that original idea can help me find my way through.

I write something every day. I stop writing in the middle of a scene, or at least at a spot where I know what happens in the next scene. In other words, I don’t write until I’ve run out of gas before I get there.

On the first draft, I do my best to write straight through, without stopping to edit or rewrite. Sometimes I can do that, other times I can’t. Shutting out the internal editor is difficult. That is why some folks write their first draft in long hand. But that doesn’t work for me either. I’ve been known to scratch out a sentence ten times and rewrite it after each scratch out.

I downloaded to my computer the free version of ReadPlease, a read aloud program that lets me copy and paste my manuscript into the program and have the program read my words aloud to me as I follow onscreen. That way I know how it sounds and where a reader might stumble over my words.

My inspiration for story comes from paying attention to the numberless stories in our world. For instance, one day while chatting with my brother, he recounted a story told him by his father-in-law who had gone out in the swamp to hunt and fish. The swamp water had fallen to an unusually low level and before the day passed, he came upon a brass-bowed pirate schooner sticking up out of the water. He climbed up on it, wishing someone would come by so he could prove he’d seen it. The story so caught my imagination I knew it would be the basis of my third novel, Dead Wreckoning, which can out in 2009. Now, I am working on a new series that has evolved from a secondary character in Dead Wreckoning.

As you can see, I write any ol’ way I can.

ATTENTION: New Blog/Website address

We have had a great time at this blog, and thanks so much for all your comments. I am moving this blog to a new site. In other words, I am using Word Press, but I am hosting my own site. The new blog address is www.sylviadickeysmith.com (formerly my website–which will be incorporated into the new blog.)

We haven’t launched the new design, BUT that is the address where I am posting my blog on a daily basis now. All of the articles and comments on this blog will be referred and transferred over to the new design.

When the new blog is launched next week, I will come back on this site and let all my followers know. In the meantime start visiting the new temporary blog design and leave your comments.

See you there.

BLOGGING WITH PURPOSE

Our guest today is Helen Ginger. I asked Helen to talk about blogging in general and blogging specifically. Helen has refined her skill to an art form. Come join us as she shares what she’s learned about the subject and how she uses it to her advantage. SDS

Blogging can be addictive. If your reason for blogging is to get the word out about your books or to brand yourself, then the addictive nature of blogging is important. It can get tiring and, if you don’t have purpose, need and results, you may give up.

I started blogging on August 17, 2006. I got one comment. I kept blogging. On August 30th, I got two comments. Three comments over half a month — rather depressing. On the other hand, who knew about my little blog on writing and publishing? Pretty much no one. I told friends about my blog, but they weren’t blogging or doing much on the Internet back in 2006, so they didn’t stop by.

I now have over 230 Followers. Not huge numbers, but not bad. More and more people are beginning to leave comments. I’ve met hundreds of people online and have developed friendships.

I grew my readership by stumbling along and dragging myself up the learning curve. My free weekly newsletter has been going out to writers around the globe for over 10 years. So you can see I don’t give up easily.

Here are some things I’ve discovered:

Choose a Theme for Your Blog

Mine is Writing and Publishing. Yours can be whatever you want. Stick to your theme so visitors know what to expect, but you can make exceptions. Sometimes I blog about something else. For example, about once a month, I’ve started blogging Mermaid Tales. Ninety-nine percent of the time, though, I stick to my subject. Your theme can even be a scheduled mix. On Mondays, you blog about X, on Tuesdays, you blog about Y, and so on.

Blog Consistently

I blog every day, 7 days a week. My followers know they can visit my blog any day and find something new. You might choose not to blog on weekends, but if you inconsistently miss blogging, say you disappear for two weeks, people will stop checking your blog.

Keep Your Posts Relatively Short

Readers tend to skip long posts. Shorter is better, but guest posts are expected to run long.

Pay Attention to Your Commenters

People who take the time to leave a comment are important. You don’t have to respond to every comment (although I know some bloggers who do), but you should check your comments several times over the course of the day and make a comment of your own, so your visitors won’t feel like they’re talking into a vacuum.

Pay it Back, Pay it Forward

Visit the blogs of those who comment on your blog. Read their post and leave a comment. You’re paying them back for visiting your blog – and you’re learning something in the process. Every day, try to pay it forward to one or two people. While you’re visiting other blogs, if you note someone you’ve not met before but they made an interesting or informative comment on that blog, zip over, read their blog post and leave a comment. This is how you maintain your followers and develop new ones.

Get the Word Out

Let people know you’re blogging. Put the URL on your business card. Put it on your Facebook and MySpace page. Add it to your sig line. Tweet it. I’m on Twitter and I try to tweet each day’s post at least twice a day. When I have time and someone else has a post that really interests me, I’ll tweet their blog.

Don’t Let Blogging Take Over Your Life

I’ve found that blogging is less of a chore if I write several posts at one sitting. I don’t write a post then immediately publish it. I’ll take a day and write maybe three or 5 posts, then schedule them to automatically post on the days and times I want.

While I don’t claim to be a blogging expert, these are some of the things I’ve found that work for me. If it’s too much to take on all at once, add them into your routine slowly. Develop your addiction over time.

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Possible links if you want them:

Helen’s website:
http://helenginger.com

TSTC Publishing:
http://publishing.tstc.edu/

TechCareers: Avionics
https://shop.tstc.edu/xcart/home.php?cat=295

TechCareers: Automotive Technicians
https://shop.tstc.edu/xcart/home.php?cat=292

Helen’s blog:
http://straightfromhel.blogspot.com

Helen on Twitter:
http://twitter.com/MermaidHel

Helen’s free e-newsletter, Doing It Write:
http://helenginger.com/diw.htm

Legends In Our Own Minds®
http://legendsinourownminds.com

2010 Stories form the Heart V conference page:
http://www.storycircle.org/Conference

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HELEN’S MINI BIO:

Helen Ginger is a freelance novel editor, with an informational and interactive blog for writers and a weekly e-newsletter that has been going out to subscribers around the globe for nine years. She coaches writers on the publishing industry, finding an agent, and polishing their work for publication. An adept speaker, she has presented at Story Circle Network’s National Conference, Writers’ League of Texas’ Agents & Editors Conference, Baylor University and Mary Hardin-Baylor University. She is an owner-partner and Women’s Marketing Director for Legends In Our Own Minds®, which specializes in creative networking opportunities for companies and groups. Helen will be moderating the Getting Published panel at Story Circle Network’s 2010 national Stories from the Heart conference on February 5-7.

Murder, She Writes

The last Monday of March will be the last live broadcast of my blogtalk radio program, Murder, She Writes. This has been a one-year project for me and I’ve met a number of delightful authors. However, my own writing pulls me to spend more time focusing on that. I have guests booked until the end of March, so if you are booked, you will still get your time on the air. Tune in and here the last three month’s programs.

Thanks much for everyone’s encouragement and delightful support. It has been so much fun!

BLOGGING WITH PURPOSE

Be sure and come back tomorrow when Helen Ginger will be our guest blogger talking about blogging with a purpose. She will be talking about how:

“Blogging can be addictive. If your reason for blogging is to get the word out about your books or to brand yourself, then the addictive nature of blogging is important. It can get tiring and, if you don’t have purpose, need and results, you may give up….”

You won’t want to miss this successful blogger, and one of my favorite people.

ON WRITING: THE D OF DELAYED GRATIFICATION

Delayed gratification. Somewhere I read that delayed gratification was one of the signs a person had moved from childhood to that of being an adult. Delayed gratification, the ability to work hard to reach a goal and then wait to receive any reward for such effort.

Can’t think of any other effort more fitting for an author, especially a published one.

Let’s see, with my latest work, A WAR  OF HER OWN, a women’s fiction set during WWII, I drafted the novel during NANOWRIMO two or three years ago, I forget which. In the meantime, I’ve written two novels in my mystery series and had both of them published. I completed the rewrite of WAR a few months ago and began the query process, and continue that process today.

I’ve had numerous “close calls” and received fantastic feedback from several agents and editors, but no offers of representation. The work has possibilities, I know that, so I journey on, looking forward to 2010 and a resurgence of American economy.

Meanwhile, I’ve had a cookbook published, started work on a whole new series called SWAMP SLEUTH, and begun the fourth book in the Sidra Smart mysteries, with a working title of DANCE WITH THE DEVIL.

I suppose that means I’m an adult and a writer, eh?

How about you? How do you define delayed gratification and what has been your experience with such?

ON WRITING: THE D OF DECISION-MAKING

To be a writer means that a person has more decisions to make than  Carter conceivably has liver pills. (Does that guy Carter even still make liver pills? Seems to me he had to take the name liver off the name of the product years ago anyway, which certainly works for me, but hopefully you get the point.)

This article does not address all the decisions a person must make in the publishing world, nor will it attempt  to be a comprehensive list of the different publishing options available today. Any number of people have written on that topic and done a good job doing so.

Instead, I prefer to talk about how a person who wants to write decides what that will be, whether fiction, non-fiction, full length, short stories, poetry, songs… (And sometimes how those decisions aren’t made, but rather grow organically.)

Personal example: For any number of years, I felt like I had a book in me. I had this image of putting on paper all the lessons I’d learned over a life time–non-fiction. Then, when I conducted research on what books were available on the topic I had to ask myself “What do I offer that hasn’t already been said?”

Okay, scrap that. Back to the drawing board.

That’s when Dance On His Grave, my first mystery book, began to form in my head and then took flight.

Truth be known, I didn’t intend to write a series, but once I found an agent, she asked me to write synopses for two more books with the same protagonist so she could sell Dance On His Grave as the first in a series.

Now, with those three written, several writer friends who fell in love with a character in my third book in the series, Dead Wreckoning, have called for a new series featuring Boo Murphy, an old woman more comfortable in the swamps than on land. “Call it Swamp Sleuth,” Fort Worth mystery author Earl Staggs begged.

Unable to resist a request such as that, I’m now working on the first draft of Swamp Sleuth.

Of course writers have a choice on what they write, but sometimes that decision-making grows in a way we don’t anticpate. And that’s the fun of it. Lesson? Don’t be worried about what you will write. Just write. Don’t be afraid to find your passion and your voice, and then go put it into words.